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Tu y yo, y nadie mas by ~SweetsDreams:iconSweetsDreams:





        ~~ Tu y yo, y nadie más ~~
      La oscuridad de tus ojos se va poco a poco desvaneciendo,
      aparece tu cuerpo andando por un largo pasillo,
      tus ojos alcanzan a ver una habitación de color rojo al final.
      
      Ven hacia aquí, te estoy esperando.
      
      Abres la puerta totalmente y allí estoy yo,
      te espero acostada en la cama,
      te espero sin decir nada,
      espero que vengas a mí.
      
      Llegas a mi lado, y todo parece tan real,
      que sin poder evitarlo abres los ojos y
      todo desaparece.
      
      Desaparezco de nuevo, pero volveré a aparecer,
      porque cada noche pensaras lo mismo,
      hasta que al fin se haga realidad.
      
      
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      ~~ You and I and anyone else ~~
      
      The darkness of your eyes is gradually fading,
      Appears your body walk for a long corridor,
      Reach your eyes to see a red room at the end.
      
      Come to here, I am waiting for you.
      
      Open the door completely and there I am,
      I hope you lying in bed,
      I hope you without saying anything,
      I hope you come to me.
      
      Do you get next to me, and everything seems so real,
      without being able to prevent this opens the eyes and
      everything disappears.
      
      I disappear again, but will return to appear,
      because every night thinking the same thing,
      until it finally becomes a reality.
©2008-2009 ~SweetsDreams
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Author's Comments

Espero que os guste mi primer texto...

Lo escribi practicamente sin pensarlo mucho, me gusta escribir y que no haga falta retocar nada.

Mery et dedique el meu primer poema ^^

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I hope you like my first text ...

I write almost without thinking much, I like to write and do not need to tweak anything.

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:iconassailant17:
Cool! it was like a dream huh?

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:sing:
"Im lucky Im in love with my best friend
Lucky to have been where I have been
Lucky to be coming home again"
-Jason Mraz & Colbie Caillat
:heart:
:iconsweetsdreams:
yes... I always close my eyes and write... I dream awakens
:iconassailant17:
Cool.:)

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:sing:
"Im lucky Im in love with my best friend
Lucky to have been where I have been
Lucky to be coming home again"
-Jason Mraz & Colbie Caillat
:heart:
:iconkatie-cuddles:
i really love the theme in this that one day dreams will become reality :D
Also thank you for translating the poem into english. Keep up the good work and cant wait to see more work from you :D
:iconsweetsdreams:
This dream now is real ^^

I love that you like, and thanks for the comment :hug:
:iconxnamelessdreamerx:
Ostres! O.o

Al principi pensava: NO pot seeeer xP!

Jooo m'encanta aquest poema, de veritat, és super bonic.

T'estimo
:iconsweetsdreams:
jeje El vaig escriure fa prou de temps però sempre m'ha agradat molt xD

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Te invito a ~ElClubdelaPalabra, el lugar donde las palabras cobran vida.

My manipulation account --> =kamy-ska
:iconxnamelessdreamerx:
Jo el vaig llegir... m'encanta :heart:

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